Black Poetry : A message to Love & lust!!

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  1. naija-man

    naija-man Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dear Love,

    whoever U are and wherever u are,...you really know how to mess with a brother's head and emotions....I can't lie, there were times when i thought i felt you...there were times when i thought you were really there; but there were also times when i used your name emotionlessly...
    i see you with in other people, who hold hands and kiss and touch in the street, and I'm like " yeah right, you guys are not in love, u just like each other alot,....real love aint there"....

    i hope i'm not rambling on, Love? are u listening....?....i know U exist somewhere,..i BELIEVE you do, and i hope you come along when my future black queen comes along..and it's the real you!!.....cos i don't want your look-a-like to come along to decieve me...lust!!

    Your bad-*** cousin lust has visited me a few times...messing with my head!
    tell her to stop! Lust has ruined,confused and hurt alot of folks!!....so lust, U keep away....cos i know your listening!..
    anyway..i cant talk 4 long Love......but when U get this message....holla back!
    the fate of my future with my Queen depends on it.
    (And Lust, U keep away..cos i'll know if it is you!!!)

    peace.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No one wants to be fooled into confusing lust with love. I enjoyed this genuine conversation here, and hopefully when you meet your queen, the love will be crystal clear.
     
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    naija-man Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx!!....I hope so too.
     
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    Cool
    I enjoyed the read. Stay strong so Love wins.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    It's funny how Lust try to control the mind to feed the Heart where
    love often visits and go rapidly , too many have taken love & lust
    and twisted it into there personal glist but we know how strong sir.lust
    can be in the heat of the moment or under the passion play pit.

    A strong head and heart of love and truth will always come down to visit
    and bring the true joy over the hitter of lust ......Awesome write
     
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    naija-man Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Names have been changed*

    post-script:
    Love, yeah..it's me AGAIN i had a run in with your lil'cousin 'crush'. i tell ya', crush can be mischevious. but he aint much of a bother, cos he almost never sticks around. i remember when he was hovering around back when i waz 6/7 and that girl in my class caught my attenion. Then agen when i waz 8...except this tyme we scored big tyme,(well to me it waz big)...he made throw sticks at the girl i liked; her name was Sienna*...she was older tho'..she told me if i stopped throwing the sticks she would get me gum after skool,(Thanx crush, u make brothas do silly stuff too) AND SHE DID..i almost forgot, she called me back when she saw me walk home with my best-friend.
    oh and the other gurl i liked too, *Essence...yeh, she waz older too, i remeber when it was playtime, i waz spinning in circles and then WHAM, i fell backwards to the ground, Essence came along to help me and walk 2 the office, but i waz too dizzy and in too much pain too know wat waz happening.

    anyway..tell crush that i still know he is around,
    anyway let me stop, cos i'll go on all day...peace
     
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    yes with Love on bound and capsided by Lust a crush also can squeeze
    it's way in that will change feelings and emotions as well , i feel ya here .
     
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