Black Poetry : A Message From Your Unconscious

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  1. IFE

    IFE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A Message From Your Unconscious
    [​IMG] I am your Soul, and I have no place.

    You know me, although you have forgotten who I am. You have known me since before the Ancient Time, before time, as we know it, began.

    Now I slide away from your consciousness. I slip around in the darkness of your unconscious. You don’t want to know me anymore.

    You have come to believe that I am evil and a partner of the One who is called Evil. But I am not. I am only your Soul.

    Listen, while I still live. Because if you do not, I will die soon. And when I die, you cannot live because we are one, though separated.

    Let me tell you who I am. Try hard to hear me. Open your Heart for just a moment and feel the truth. For your sake as well as mine.
     
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    Profound message heard loud and clear - nicely done!
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    A message worded well...I dig the content .
     
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    Oooooh Yes sister yes yes yes love the lesson in this piece/peace its a quiet but powerful call to attention. Thank you for this sister poet!
     
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