Black Poetry : A Message for Fools

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SeekingMaat, Oct 2, 2010.

  1. SeekingMaat

    SeekingMaat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Only fools vilify
    and speak ill of their dead
    When millions of innocent blood has been shed
    Ancestors say
    take their Name from your mouth
    They see through vernacular,
    however its couched
    Fools call on their Ancestors
    and then spit on their graves
    The Ancestors not wanting false honor, false praise
    Fools filled with such hate and manipulation
    Arousing the Ancestors’ ‘just’ indignation
    Fools crossing that line
    to gross disrespect
    Fools better prepare
    for whatever fools get!

    ASE
     
  2. Amnat77

    Amnat77 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ASE O'

    gheez... i got chills with this one!!

    nice...
     
  3. Jens

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    strong words, but what is your message?
     
  4. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm a fool to want you.

    SPEAK ON!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    foolish deeds is a foolish plea !
    they gain only foolish acts and get what they have coming

    A real chiller .
     
  6. SeekingMaat

    SeekingMaat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks brotha 1poet, you made me smile lol :em2300:

    Thanks SiStar Amnat and Brotha Rich, and hope it was 'chills' as in thrills :em2300:

    htp
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    no doubt, sis this one fills da heart.
     
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