Black Poetry : A Memory in my eye

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  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Fall settles in,
    with Jazz tunes on my radio.
    I gaze out of my window,
    with memories of "us".
    For once I am tooken back to a time when love was real
    just as the thought of us.

    The leaves fall,
    with tears streaming down my cheek.
    The colors change,
    just as your eyes with your mood.
    I miss Jazz in the Fall
    It will never be the same.
    But you, you will forever be a memory in my eye.
    A memory.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! i felt ya here nice work of eye contact.
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow.......this was so emotionally written

    truly felt.........enjoying your work!
     
  4. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks! much love...it's been a long time comin' but I'm back and have quitely been inspired by everyone here and didn't want to be selfish...thank you thank you thank you
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice enjoy the read...
    all i can say is wow
     
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