Black Poetry : A Meeting of Rhymes

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Jun 27, 2007.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A Meeting of Rhymes

    On the streets persuaded and like meat marinated with
    the flavor of crime my behavior has declined and drifted
    like lost boats say false quotes habits need to be uplifted
    ita a **** shame to prevail while your campaign fails
    it critical and wild to face political exile best live upscale
    faced heat that'll leave candles in blazes I’ve dismantled stages
    with rhymes from my living room giving tunes that amazes
    my scripts are stripped by tailors and like ships and sailors
    governed by maritime and every line different zone for mailers
    never been the worse bozo doe especially in my first solo show
    in five years live fears exists brisk when rapping as my flow go
    got bold shoulders like old soldiers marked by wounds as my art
    bloom and go boom! Blow up like handgrenades and try spark
    a war, yall can read my flow logo on the solo show after dark
    cats may marry and life stay hairy after that, them marital vows
    become charactible bow wows have to bark for sex kitty meows
    hope for dinner with food soaked in vinegar a real winner like
    beer stuff taste great and less filling the stress thrilling my sight
    embrace my heart before the race start on calories and dang steroids
    got to be brief on this beef sodium at an all time high prefer to avoid
    this meal
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    rhymebad

    http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=11896

    1. Don't flood the forum with your poetry!
    Yessssss ... we want to read your work, but please give us a little bit at a time. Don't post every peace you've ever written, immediately after joining us. Start slowly by posting a peace or two at a time. If you have 5+ peaces on the "first page" of the poetry forum, you are probably posting too many within a short period of time.

    Every Member wants their work to remain on the "first page" of the poetry forum as long as possible. If you flood the forum with many of your peaces ... you are pushing everyone else's work to the back pages (which happens quickly enough because there are so many poets).


    2. Give the kind of love you want to receive!

    Encourage the poets by reading and responding to their work, especially those peaces that have few or no replies. Unlike number 1 above, there is no possible way that you can give too much love.

    now rhymebad YOU of all people no i not mad at you

    you have 7 pieces on the front page

    and you're posting and you are not spreading any love

    question: why are you trying to make my life harder than it has to be?

    lolol

    start spreading love

    rhymebad question - you don't find anyone else's work here on Destee.com poetry worthy of your comment?

    worthy of your love?
     
  3. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YEAH FEEL YOU MY STUFF SINK TO BOTTOM SO FAST HAVE TO KEEP WRITING JUST TO STAY AFLOAT
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Tyte joint bruh !
     
  5. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yup this is heat!
     
  6. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sup Rhyme...one more thing pa...

    when you get a moment check out my joint 'HIS-tory'
    and check out my rendition of a keystyle like you requested
    would love some feedback pa!


    peace and Purpose
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yea

    like i said i ain't mad at you by any stretch of the imagination

    it was just at 7 pieces

    and i understand your point

    that's why it's not that serious to some degree

    because the page was moving very slow

    so i could see it wasn't malicious

    and i know how you get down

    i know you remember the poetry page back about 5 years ago wouldn't have

    a piece dated four days ago still at the bottom

    lol

    the poets like you and the others are the ones who make the place what it is

    and keeping posting

    and spread a little more love

    it's all good

    it's all rhymebad

    peace

    one and four tenths
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    actually June 23 is at the bottom of this page right now

    that's six days ago man

    so that's why i'm at a dilemna too

    i wanted to post something

    and i see it's not moving

    one i my pieces on the page is a collab

    does that counts against me?

    lol

    hahahhahhahaha
     
  9. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow this was some funny stuff discossed my stuff stays at the bottom so other people posts can't drop now ain't that a bewitch
     
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