Black Haiku : A Maze Ing

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love can be a maze
    This intricate
    Web spun from
    Purest
    Gold​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    True love is a maze
    spun wit pure joy
    of wo-man
    and of
    man
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    beautiful beautiful

    amazing is right

    tough vaniku here
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Try it out so'ja ...here let me give you one! ...lol

    Da way I see things
    street life ain't it,
    so'ja, can you
    add to
    it
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man and woman bond
    An a maze ing
    Potion brews
    It's called
    Love

    Thank you kindly Street So'ja. And that was a great vaniku queent. Okay So'ja, your turn, QQn.
     
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    Amazed wit deep love
    thy heart withold
    to be loved
    by one
    soul​
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It pulsates, amazed
    by each heartbeat
    Filling souls
    With one
    love
     
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    Behold the beauty,
    life lived as one.
    Hearts revealed
    to see
    love​
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    you guys are amazing man

    i'm not that talented

    that's why i admire you talented poets here who lay this stuff down
     
  10. Scry'be

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    I had to drop my own two cents here. LOL


    VaniOku



    i'll casually
    toss my love toward
    yo open
    mouth, swal/
    low!


    there's the growl of me dancin'
    where yo heart is-my tears
    mingle wit yo
    natural heart-beat!​
     
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