Black Poetry : A Man

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by true love, Aug 30, 2003.

  1. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I were a man
    Would I feel the same way
    Would I be able to look into my
    Pretty Brown Eyes
    And lie
    Or not fall in love at all
    Would I be able to kiss me
    With no emotion
    Yet so passionately
    That I couldn't breath
    Would I be able to hold me so close
    And still not know if I were in love
    Or not
    Or would my feelings overcome me
    And I would just wanna marry me
    Because
    There's noone else in the world
    Like me
    You see
    If I were a man
    I'd probably keep me close
    Knowing how many other
    Cats
    Want me
    If I were a man I'd never let me go
    If I were a man
    I'd steal my heart
    Away
    From you
    If I were a man.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very moving twist of sex
    and the answer mostly yes
    if u were........
    nicely crafted poetically
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL, thanks $$RICH$$
     
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    most welcomeeeeeeeeeee sistah Queen
     
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    oh my :jawdrop: how did i miss this HOT one gurrl...you gots to let ya cousin know when you droppin wisdom for real :) lol
    this was so poignant and powerful I wondered the same thang :) but i love how u put it :)
     
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    This is very nice.

    A power over another is a chance to abuse. You have to be careful of the influence and how you use it. That power if you know it. And you do. Should not be abused. It is sad. instead of being honest. Knowing when you have the influence, and knowing when your not feeling the same. Continue with the attitude of after I gets this. I'm gone.

    Play a new hand. Find a different deck of cards. Don't allow yourself to be played. I care about you. Were just friends. Why wouldn't a lover or another do the same?

    So they have to lose out on sharing your love. If they can't tend to the intensity. You don't get to play here. Hope you don't mind what I just said. Who could resist those Pretty Brown Eyes.
    Much love for ya.
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    trinit424...i can't believe you felt me on this one...thanks girl, you're like my kindred spirit :)

    Hodee...you know i don't mind anything you say...your words really hit a soft spot thought. but you know they're appreciated. I have much love for you too. :heart:
     
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    brought tears to my eyes u read me from a to z. this is truly my story
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I be tryin to understand it as well honey but I guess we be stugglin togetha :)
     
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    channie...just glad to know i'm not alone in this...

    and triniti...glad you were feelin' me. thanks