Black Poetry : A man of God you are...........

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A man of God you are
    And Im thinking I wont get far

    Because he's at a place in time
    And Im thinking Im have to get mine

    Been with out a woman for 3 years
    Right with God never a fear

    Because God has revealed his purpose for your life
    And you say he's shone you, your devoted wife

    But Im being imperfect is putting myself in that picture
    I cant help but to be a part of the fixture
    I want to be a mixture

    of you
    My heart is leading me on a path telling me to do

    What my mind is telling me
    But my soul say let it be

    For if he wanted you he would say
    He hasnt even revealed to you that you make his day

    But i sit back and my mind begin to wonder
    Is he the one thats out yonder

    Our conversations are full of smile
    His gentleness with me is worthwhile

    He's been through hell like me
    He's once was a sinner like me

    But he turn his whole life to him
    And he reassure me that God love for me isnt dim

    But how can I appeal to you when Im not right
    I can sense you feel the fight

    Within me
    You know my heart is longin to be free

    And our spirit hopefully are as one
    I pray to see the sun

    So i could just hear his voice
    But being the Man of God he's left me no choice

    But to bury what I truly feel
    Since I cant appeal
    But somehow in my heart I know its real

    But I cant love a man who's

    A man of God........


    this is dedicated to the one you know who you are part two will soon follow.......
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!
    that one who knows can feel this rapid fire of emotions flowing
    pt.2 please
     
  3. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow, that was deep, full of emotions. flow on......part II, please!
     
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    Well done poet.
    Your words of emotion bring back memories and
    visions of days that I have expiernced in my mose recent past.

    FLo On
     
  5. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Almost a tear-jerker. A Wholesome piece poet. Speak on it:)
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nevar never go to far
    When love is real it's all you can feel
    Lord, knows that love is in the heart
    Beautifully said
    -D.S.
     
  7. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DIS WAZ DEEP AND I WAS FEELIN IT
    I SUMTYMEZ FEEL DIS WAY BUT I NEVA DID FOLLOW DA WAY
    NICE DROP MY SISTA
    SO FLO ON


    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
  8. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks to rich for the love that was shown to me. you always show me love i really do appreciate it

    to chocolatangel thanks for entering my world

    to that girl thanks for giving me a nice comment
     
  9. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree. (waiting)
    Sister Nevar is always at her best
    .
     
  10. black_soul

    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow as always you step up to the plate and knock it out. thank you for that waiting part two. stay beautiful queen nevar.