Black Poetry : A Man Named Quiet

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  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love a man named Quiet.
    Some think he is stuck up.
    But nay, he isn't stuck up.
    He's simply wise.
    He has learned the power
    Of possessing a silent spirit.
    I admire him.
    He is my secret.

    When I can't be alone with Quiet,
    I pull out leftover memories of him.
    They speak mightily in small voices.

    But whenever I AM with Quiet,
    My heart does rejoice.
    His wisdom shouts in whispers
    And his common sense stills me,
    Like the wind that must've heard Jesus.

    Yes, I love a man named Quiet.
    One day, we shall live continually as one.
    At night I will whisper his name...Quiet
    And he shall call me...Peace.


    ~j
     
  2. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful hush on this one. :)
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :eek: I love this piece Joyce
    Had me feelin Quiet there:wink:
     
  4. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good

    But the man named QUIET can be a spirit?And if yes is it the Holy ghost?U have a different style and I like it!
    Lloyd
    Ps:Just teach me how to follow my heart
    Just tell me why I can't be by Ur side
    From QUIET!!!The shining one!
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister...I truly admire your work...
    the wonderful combination of
    perfection and divinity...
    What a combination...

    It is truly wonderful to have you back...
    shedding light on our page regularly...
    you are a blessing to me...
     
  6. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Joyce you have me taken with this one girl.
    I'm loving it so so so much
     
  7. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Joyce, I've heard all about you from my boi, Dior and I must say you are indeed wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*smile*
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Getting in touch with the quiet, spirit of the Lord. This was serenely wonderful.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was awesome flowing love how u create
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice likes how you laid it
     
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