Black Poetry : A Man And His Life

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  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~dedicated to the life in strong men~

    with practiced skill, he tip toes around the egg shells
    strategically placed in his path...life has so arranged
    his series of events, it almost looks like happenstance
    when the mess hits the fan... but there's a pattern
    & he's a capable man

    she crafty, life,

    and she be mean sometimes ~ testing his love
    while she faking orgasms, waisting the juices
    of his creativity when he's trynna becum who he
    already be

    life sneaky too, seduces him, makes him scream
    then steals his voice....erasing all memory of when he
    had a choice

    cuz she does him good ~ she's all in his head
    he laps up the luxury she spreads across his bed...
    and she'll turn cold, in mid-stroke
    like she know she can....
    not respecting the heart of a dedicated man...

    yeah life be hard, and her rewards be very few...
    but he's worthy, and he just keeps doing what he
    gotta do....


    Alyce (c) 2001
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YES ALYCE

    STROKE DEM KEYS AND BRING ON DA WORDZ
    THAT HIT MY MENTAL STATE.:)
     
  3. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is pure poetry filtered through!!!!!

    You are in the ZONE gurl...bring the treasures down from the attic
    allow us to sift through your priceless papers

    *purified*:jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:
     
  4. MuziiKaliz

    MuziiKaliz New Member MEMBER

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    Pure voice

    Poet, your voice in this verse is pure. You speak truth in an admirable way. May inspiration visit you always.
     
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    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~A

    I Love U 4 This Classic...dis brought tears...4 real

    :heart:felt

    peace
    g-man
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a masterpiece indeed. thank you for this
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    alyce

    lovededit it

    no lie you have a fan

    DSSNY

    deep deep
     
  8. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all

    You know I'm for my brothaz who steady handling their bidness, no matter what obstacles come their way. Yes, I recognize you do exist.

    This one means alot. Thanks for feeling it with me.

    a
     
  9. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see now...

    ...this made my saturday!
    applauding this sis, cause
    this is definitely a manly tribute...

    feed us more~
     
  10. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    queen,

    as always praising the gift of your mind
    and thanx for understanding us.......

    u know how i feel. u're the best

    jh
     
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