Black Poetry : A Man Amongst Boys

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by illwillthakid, Mar 12, 2004.

  1. illwillthakid

    illwillthakid Member MEMBER

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    His smooth dark skin
    reminds them of why they love chocolate
    & his deep brown eyes
    Causes them to unwind
    & fall hard into his darkness
    Though, not tall at all
    5'7, he's yet to fall short
    & never in a life time
    Will you ever find one of his sort
    He is an artist
    Who paints pictures vividlly
    Though verbally
    And if you keep your ears to the streets you'll hear
    That they've heard of he
    He is that man
    No, he is that boy
    No, he's that one you can't help but enjoy
    He is that red haired young blood
    Who stays saying "Cuz"
    Though not gang related at all
    He's just into showing love
    17 years of age
    & on the market as he might say
    Though not acquianted with many
    He never fails to say . . . "Hey"
    He is that man
    & at the same time he is that boy
    And all together he is the one you love to enjoy
    His name is Ill Will
     
  2. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let U be known, brother...

    Nice.
     
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    Ujima Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for sharing that piece!

    Stay focused!
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flowin with pride, keep it going.
     
  5. Just_Me

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    Nice one. Glad you dropped it
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow..wonderful scribe
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very moving keep it coming
    tyte drop
     
  8. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just 17????? dang you sure you haven't been here before...lol
    Good stuff!!!!!!
     
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