Black Poetry : A Lover's Wish...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    another one...:)

    verse 1

    a lovers wish is to be loved
    a lovers wish is to be held
    a lovers wish is to be told
    that they're appreciated
    a lovers dream is only found
    in the mind of the one
    who can dream and make them happier
    than they ever thought it


    chorus

    passionate, eloquent
    lovable, memorant
    amazing
    its just crazy
    passionate, eloquent
    lovable, memorant
    amazing
    they're just crazily in love


    verse 2

    a lovers wants love in return
    in fear that they may be alone again
    a lover wants to be treated rightfully
    inspite of all the pain
    they have suffered in their day
    they just want some peace
    no pressure
    just peace


    chorus 2

    magical, dreamable
    meditation, its believable
    it drives them crazy
    its all they think about
    passionate, eloquent
    lovable, memorant
    amazing
    they're just crazily in love


    hook

    because a lover needs a real man
    and a lover needs a real woman
    and a lover is loyal and true if you only knew the lovers wish
    a lover never wants to be alone again
    happiness, long walks, and pure bliss
    massages and holding hands
    cuddling and in heaven
    never a dull moment
    only them and their love
    maybe if you knew this
    you'd understand a lovers wish...
     
  2. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Lovely,

    This is another beauty of a song!! I can hear playing on my radio!!

    Very nice, girl!!

    My best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The beauty in your writing never ceases to amaze me. This was awesome.
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot sierra!!:):):)

    awwwwwwww dreamweaver thats so sweet:) thanks girl!
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooooo..you ain't never lied about this one girl..the lyricas alone gots me chillin....if i heard you sing id probably be first in line for the cd:)...good song
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooooweeeeee!!!!

    another hit on the CD...
    track after track
    i want my copy sign and a picture too
    can't wait til dis drop !
    tyte:toast: :D
     
  7. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovely...once again you have reached out from your writtings and touched me...Thank you!
    Much Love,
    Rico
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol rich you get a picture and a cd! lol:)

    i'm so glad i could inspire you in any kind of way rico! thanks:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well let's do dis thang !!!
    so i can get my copy ya know ......!
    lol
     
  10. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol...u gotta be patient rich!:)
     
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