Black Poetry : A Lover's Dream

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  1. Sodwn2earth

    Sodwn2earth Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Note: This is not a work of my own, but someone whom I know very well and who deserves the recognition.


    Lost in your eyes,
    Emotions surging
    My mind goes blank…

    ~

    Overwhelmed by longing
    I peer into their depths
    Seeing pain, fear,
    And your prevailing love
    As slides down your cheek a lonely tear.

    ~

    Blood pulsing,
    Heart racing,
    I long to comfort you.
    As I tenderly dry your tears
    My heart reaches out to you,
    I caress your cheek
    Smoothing away your fear.

    ~

    My love pulsing within my veins,
    Body drawn to its mate,
    My love desires you
    As we close upon our fate.

    ~

    Gazing into your tear-lit eyes
    My soul reaches out,
    As I journey through your eyes
    To love devout.

    ~

    Soul searching soul
    I lose all restraint.
    Love guiding me,
    I whisper my love.
    Body exciting,
    And sight not enough,
    I reach out to you,
    My fingers burning,
    Your touch fire in my veins.
    Heart racing,
    Gasping,
    Lungs seeking air,
    Your love a beacon for my soul,
    I give in,
    I trust…
    I slowly run my fingertips over your silken skin
    And I ignite…
    My soul combusts,
    And strength leaves me.
    Necessity taking control
    As my lips search out yours,
    Tender lips softly brushing tender lips,
    We explode.
    Bodies engulfed in love’s flames,
    I devour you,
    Lips tasting your sweet ecstasy,
    Lips savoring love’s passionate intensity,
    I grasp you…
    Pressing close,
    Our bodies bonding,
    Soul’s close.
    My desperate yearning
    Consuming me.
    Our love smoldering,
    Its flame burning strong.

    ~

    Slowly, painfully I pull away,
    Eyes searching your beautiful depths,
    Body full of desire
    I tremble…
    Stretching out my hand I caress your face.
    Fingers slowly tracing your body,
    I kiss you.
    Your sweet tenderness invigorating my soul,
    And with fierce desire I touch your caramel skin
    Lips slowly sliding over your body,
    Your sweet nectar thrilling me,
    And with unbearable need I slowly undress you,
    Eyes passionately searching yours.
    I lean near whispering my love,
    My love’s passion driving me.
    I take it further,
    Kissing your lips,
    I touch you,
    Sliding my fingertips over your breasts,
    Them I softly caress.
    Probing your body,
    Grasping your breasts,
    I squeeze tightly
    Tenderly rubbing,
    Loving your body.

    ~

    Your lovely eyes staring intently into mine,
    I grasp you in love’s tender embrace.
    Holding you tight,
    I whisper “ finally my love”
    As my fire presses against you.
    Passion building,
    I lay you down,
    My hands caressing you,
    Love encouraging me,
    I kiss your breasts.
    Searching,
    Desperation driving me,
    I search for the entrance to your soul.
    Moving from breast to breast,
    Nipple to nipple,
    Kissing,
    Tasting your love.

    ~

    My soul wails,
    A long,
    Passionate plea,
    My soul’s desire tormenting me.
    As my search goes on,
    Lips,
    Tongue sliding between your breasts,
    Down your center.
    Hunger driving me on.
    Body weak,
    Longing for you love’s nourishment.

    ~

    Your strength flooding into me,
    Your heart awakening me,
    I kiss you.
    Hands, uncontrolled,
    Slowly clearing the way,
    Teasing your succulent limbs,
    As I kiss you stomach,
    Tongue tasting your sweet being
    I slowly move beyond…

    ~

    Fingers tenderly stroking caramel thighs,
    Our feelings reach a new height.
    As my lips reach your flowering beauty,
    Tongue slowly tasting your honey,
    Consuming your love.
    I moan in ecstatic joy
    Experiencing the warmth of your love,
    The contentment…

    ~

    Containing my desire no longer,
    My search complete.
    Our bodies unite,
    My soul sensing an end to pain,
    End to torment,
    My soul realizing its home,
    Our souls bond,
    Resisting freedom,
    Nothing breaking our love’s bond.

    ~

    Our hearts, our souls merge,
    Our lives complete.
    Our souls,
    Our bodies,
    Moan in ecstasy.
    As we move together,
    Our souls unite,
    Every part of our beings
    Joining in delight.
    .
    ~

    Silence broken by softly murmured, “ I love yous”,
    We continue.
    Moving together,
    Love driving us on,
    Our desire smoldering,
    Our flame strong.

    ~

    Joy turns to bliss,
    As our love,
    Sweet ambrosia,
    Overcomes me.
    My love strong,
    Sweet,
    Throbbing inside of you.
    Our bodies an inferno,
    As sweat cascades down our bodies,
    Melting our once wintry souls.

    ~

    My soul moaning those sweet words,
    My love burning deep within you,
    Your love drenching me,
    As our souls break free,
    The world lost down below.

    ~

    Our soul’s entwined in flight
    Carry us forth,
    Beyond sight,
    Beyond secular pains.
    Our joy a barrier.
    Our love, our strength,
    Takes all pain,
    Buries beneath our joy.

    ~

    In a last moment
    Of joy our souls burst forth,
    Love making of us one being,
    Essence fused,
    Our love peaking
    In everlasting bliss.


    Julius Raymond Matts


    By amar is life
     
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    very nice drop indeed one get high love on dis ....
     
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    Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.

    We extend an invitation to the author to join our family and grow with us.
     
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    There's nothing more pleasing than to see a brother...
    cast off all restraint and just go there :read:
    taking their reader wantonly by the hand
    leading them methodically down
    the corridor of a "lovers dream"...
    *whew*...I didn't want to wake up from that
    but I must say you leave a reader full and overflowing
    so I am pleased :toast:

    This was a beautifully subtle yet passion brimming flow
    You created a nice balance...
    Some might shy away from such an epic piece
    but I don't believe brevity to have a place where love resides

    Nice work poet!

    ~~~~~Encore~~~~
     
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    Wow you got my attention now..
    thanx for sharing..
     
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    swollow..














    well Poet tell the Poet julles that this was a heavenly beautiffull poem..
    with a soft vision between the words and a well heavy painfeld of beautyness
    touch ...
    trough reading this poem..





    and it reminds me of a poem i wrote when i was in my dreamy days..

    but this one i think is more beautyfull..







    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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