Black Poetry : A lover's dance

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A lover's dance
    hot wax on the edge of a needy body
    honey tipped nipples waiting to be licked
    her back arched so I can pass my moans under
    Sliding among each other's slick skin
    Sin behind the shadows of our minds
    We won't tell a soul /

    A lover's dance
    Souls conversating on a subliminal level
    wine running moonshine that shines her every inch
    getting drunk off each others existence
    whipped cream her tongue whipped her and her
    screams only Venus can hear as she creams

    A lover's dance
    kissing her 'til she lost her mind
    and I am loved and adored by 15 different
    personalities / all coated in an elixir
    that even Cupid can't mix

    A lover's dance
    anywhere
    anytime
    anyspace
    anyplace

    for this dance there are
    no boundaries just endless
    music of doves beating
    their songs on the wind.

    (c) 2001 blakverb
     
  2. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uhhh... Well ****! lol

    now das da kinda dancin im talkin about!!! Verb dat was Killa dog!!! da mami's gone be checkin fa you...

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
  3. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reas-

    Thanks bro for the comp. I'm trying to get this scribe thing write. Ya know.

    one love, blak
     
  4. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa!!!

    You've got this whole sensuality thing down pat. I'm am, simply, in awe at how you never cease to amaze me. A, truly, hot piece... :hot:
     
  5. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you sis!

    MapleX -

    Didn't you know that "sensuality" is my middle name? :laughing:

    Thank you sis for replying.

    by the way...how did you get/come up with a name like MapleXtract? That's is a name that provokes a piece to be written.

    one love, blak
     
  6. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pancakes...

    I was eating pancakes with a lot of syrup, the day I thought it up. Nah, i'm kidding :D, really, it was derived from a piece that I had written.
     
  7. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MapleX, well I guess that means you are (a) sweet...

    (a) person
    (b) tasting
    (c) smelling
    (d) all of the above


    or when you sweat you coat your lover in maple syrup extracted from your skin...

    ?

    one love, blak
     
  8. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmm....

    I've never been really good at multiple choice, unless I, really, know the material; so I'm gonna have to chose (d) on this one;
    and I extract, indefinitely :D...
     
  9. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MapleX, I figured it was "D". I can tell by your work. You have provoked a piece, you'll know what it is once you read it.

    one love, blak
     
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    Shakin' da crown....

    in amazement as I watch, read, and learn from da man!!!!

    Outstanding piece BlakV!!!!!!!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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