Black Poetry : A Love That was ours

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by vivacious vixen, Mar 30, 2003.

  1. vivacious vixen

    vivacious vixen Member MEMBER

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    A love so sweet
    A love so deep
    Together we shared
    A love that was ours

    A love so distinct
    A love so unique
    Together we shared
    A love that was ours

    Lasting love
    Love that lasts forever

    Lively love
    Love that lives forever

    Lingering love
    Love that lingers eternally over my heart

    Lucid love
    Love as clear as blue morning skies

    Loyal love
    Love that was faithful till our sorrowful depart

    Together we shared
    A love that was ours

    :heart: from your loving wife
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "shared?" ...is that a "past tense" thing? i hope not. love is a very hard thing to find. if you haven't lost it, don't be so quick to throw it away.

    maintain the fight for what is yours.

    1luv
     
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    a togetherness rapture of something so rare
    dis how it should be when it come to love
    flow on !
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi vixen and welcome to detees.
    Loved the flowing imagery, it works well.
    Especially lovin:

    Lingering love
    Love that lingers eternally over my heart

    Lucid love
    Love as clear as blue morning skies

    *Emma*
     
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    This is a nice poem I like the way it make a person feel if they know it is too them. Good job in getting your heart out there.Christopher's Place
     
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