Quiet Poetry Lounge : A love Story?

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  1. Realguyjeff

    Realguyjeff Active Member MEMBER

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    The road to love was jumbled and dark,
    so I felt my way through the eventide.

    To my surprise I found love in her eyes,
    Or maybe her thighs, I can’t remember.

    I was unconscious and she was Venus,
    the brightest object in my night’s sky.

    Goddess of love and beauty in my dreams,
    She and me were connected etymologically.

    Because I dreamed she was a part of me.
    Somewhere near the very heart of me.

    But then I awoke

    Standing on the edge of reality,
    And the outermost ridge of sincerity.

    Caught up in the mainstream’s theorem of love,
    I seemed to have fallen in.

    Only now in retrospect do I finally see the truth,
    I never fell in love; I’m sure I fell straight through.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    such beautiful piece .....keep scribing poet
     
  3. queenplove

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    I love your poems its very sensual and real I'm only 16 years old so ask me this how do you know when a ***** really love ya huh
     
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    welcome queenplove to destee's house of compassionate love
    and many cares
    nice to see ya wordz of ink
    continue ya journey here upon family & friendz
    welcome dear young sista
     
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    This is a wonderfully crafted piece~!~
     
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    check this one out uppin it back
     
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