Black Poetry : a love story in six parts...

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  1. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    get out of there gurl
    that is a snake’s pit for sure
    vipers everywhere

    -he winces at her words and asks why she speaks to him so coldly

    she wonders what he
    expects her to do when she
    fears what may come next

    -he says to trust him, he loves her, if her heart is broken, his heart is broken too!

    this love’s wretched
    no outlet available
    to share emotions

    -he says that love makes the darkest situation bright...it thrives in dead places

    light in darkness love?
    does such a love really exist?
    show me - i’ll follow...

    -he says to let love guide and make a path for them through the pain

    we could just fall in
    let it engulf us in flames
    consequence unknown

    -he says we couldn’t survive the fall - the valley is too deep

    i am overwhelmed
    love once again caught in the fray
    and again... love can’t stay!

    -he says he is glad to have known true love once in life and be made a better man because of
    it...he tells her to wait for love...arms outstretched to embrace it...for she is love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sistah sistah sistah !!!!

    :heart: true love flowin here in dis story:heart:
    and so beautifully sprayed to perfection :love: :kiss:
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MzD.


    ...this entire piece is Love(li-ness)... unfiltered! :)

    thank you for sharing it sistah-poet!

    :heart:
    SunShyne~
     
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    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $RICH$- thank u for showing me so much luv!

    SunShyne- i'm glad u felt my flow, sistah!


    :heart:
    dee
     
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    great crafting of poetic thought here...i must reflect on the innermost parts of your mental givings...

    tight poet


    one.
     
  6. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u know how u just feel something and u have to get it out...the pen is there...so u write...thanks for feeling me, brutha!

    ;)
    dee
     
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    That was good... that was real good. I don't know how I missed it. That was good. Mmm Hmm... real good.
     
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    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the read sis!

    dee
     
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