Black Poetry : a Love Song in G. Major

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Jan 15, 2002.

  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    is it redundant to say—
    that on any given day…
    in more than 69 different
    ways…
    You are the mus(e)ic that
    moves me… soothes me…
    sends me swingin’…
    hummin’… singin’….
    What a wonderful thing
    love is
    ” …followed by
    I love me some him”…
    & just between You & me…
    i sometimes find myself
    trying… to add words…
    to every ballad i’ve ever
    heard… Miles blow
    (& you know… like i know
    Miles don’t need no help!!)

    but i can’t control myself
    ‘cause You get in(to) me
    …3dimensional-ly… wait!
    make that tri-lateral-ly
    you effortless-ly take hold
    of my mind/body/soul &
    i get LiFTeD… eLeVAteD…
    forever&always stimulated
    simply from the idea of You
    & although it’s true that i
    could go on & on… i’ll just
    say that i hope you’ll stay—
    & continue to loving-ly impart
    the mus(e)ic that accompanies
    the words of my heart.


    © SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved
     
  2. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    let me tell u what you just did

    you just took my heart on a roller ice skating rink in decemcer and then on a home cooked meal on the roof with fresh glads flowers in july and a fresh fruit, candle lit bath....

    sounds like some beautiul lovin.....
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mr M. awww... thank you for takin' the time to read &
    reply to this piece. it's very very special to me... personal-ly.
    & if it SOUNDS like some good lovin'... well! you know! :)
     
  4. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blow BlakGurl Blow....

    I see you're there "mus{e}ically!!! You amaze per your usual way of course...

    Is there anything you can't do??? :confused:

    Gifted poetess you be BlakG!!!!

    :love:
    GQ
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sunshyne

    ya rayz is strong and fulfilling to my soul
    dis i hold so dear .......lovin this spray of shyne


    got my shades on dis morning:cool:
     
  6. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    snappin ma fingers while listening to the bass strumming behind this flow...

    tight scribe ma...got me thinkin'

    i'll keep it to maself :D
     
  7. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh hell

    now I gotta go buy a MILES cd so I can get deeper in this here groove...... Ya rayz gurl ya rayz




    One
     
  8. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aww Sunshower!!!

    You know I...

    Well this hea...

    I really loved....

    Aww **** Guhl you know it was Mus(e)ic to my eyez! You sure know how to give a brutha the Big Head! Sang it one mo' Gin aiight?

    Wait...

    Uhh...

    I gotta whole lot more to say I just cant find muh **** vocabulary! But you know I gotz Madd love fa ya suthern guhl!

    Wit cho stankin ***!
    Reas
     
  9. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Know What SunShyne?

    I'm totally lovin your work! Being from the dyrty south myself,
    you definitely representin for all the southern girls!!!

    Ain't nothin like dat southern hospitality :)
     
  10. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ga..your love poetry

    just keeps gettin better and better...

    "3 dimensional-ly/tri-lateral-ly"...that would have to just about take care of all a girls needs huh....

    K
     
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