Black Poetry : A Love Like This Is

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  1. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some of you my remember my piece "A Love Like That", well this is like the second installment. Hope you like it.


    A Love Like This

    I used to be filled with longing,
    Wanting what the others shared,
    I used to hate the way they'd kiss each other,
    Just to show they cared,
    I used to wish to feel the touch,
    Of someone holding me so close,
    I used to want to be the one,
    That he loved the most,
    I used to long to dance,
    They way that they'd dance together,
    I used to ache for the hope,
    That I'd have love to share forever,
    I used to bed to hear sweet nothings,
    Whispered in my ear,
    I used to pray to have someone,
    To kiss away my fear,
    Now as I feel your arms around me,
    I watch their eyes burn green,
    I guess that on the inside,
    Their love isn't what it seemed,
    While we dance the way,
    That I used to dream we would,
    I hear the other's thoughts,
    Wishing that they could,
    After longing to feel the love they shared,
    I have finally found you,
    Now that our love is stronger,
    It is them that are wishing to.


    31/7/02
    *Emma*
     
  2. honeebrownsuga

    honeebrownsuga Active Member MEMBER

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    Patience is a virtue
    All great things come in time
    I'm wishing too,
    but I'm glad the love u've longed for finally came to u

    I enjoyed this. Thank u 4 sharing.
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    emma.


    ...speak on it lil sis! speak on it!! :D

    love... a many splendered thing, indeed!
    & the right one is well worth waiting for. :)

    i love-did this! thank you for sharing.

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    emma...yes, indeed they are. this is quite nyce, gurl.


    ~~~lovechaptas~~~
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Always been

    Diggin ya style ma... still am.

    Reas
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    honeebrownsuga - Yes, that I now know. Good things come to those who wait. He'll find you soon.

    Elayne - thanks for the love. I appreciate it muchly.

    Listerscribin - Thanks for reading

    Reason - thanks for appreciating my piece. It means a lot to me.

    *Emma*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyght scribe poet
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simply lovely
     
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