Black Poetry : A Love I Never Knew

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  1. Sodwn2earth

    Sodwn2earth Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A tornado of sorts has ripped apart my soul.
    An emotional tidal wave that cannot be controlled.
    As much as I try, I can’t seem to find,
    the right way through.
    Lost one, gain another, but I’m still so unsure.
    I’m starting to question the key to my happiness.
    I don’t want to be unsure anymore.
    I want for it to be known
    The love of my life, the soul I can call home.
    I have yet to find, though how desperately I seek.
    Forever will the thought of lost love plague me.
    Can I not bear, to live this cold world alone?
    Or is it that I’m afraid, I won’t find the one I was truly meant for?
    The questions, the longing, the thought of an insufferable calling.
    Please won’t you please come and stop the pain?
    Just to end it all, so that my heart may beat again.
    So that it may love as it never has.
    So I won’t feel these emotions, obstacles that hold me back.
    Won’t you just let me find you please?
    To stop the hurt, stop my heart’s crippling disease.
    I can’t... I won’t, go on without you.
    To live, breathe, and die for a love I never knew
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the kinda love that calls da heart
    yet don't know where to even start
    there are waves of deep love floatin
    and heavy feeling of body emotions
    to love .........very nice write...........
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I could feel the yearning in these words. Most have been here. Well written flow poet.
     
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    tyte poem. i dont know whats worse, the longing/yearning for a love u never had or the longing/yearning for a love that is no longer urs...something to think about.keep ya head up.
     
  5. Auroraflower

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    i understand where youre comming from...



    and you wrote it down beautifull....


    though i long for that love...



    i have found a love i never knew

    gods love...

    and you know like i tell manny sisers here mannny times and brothers..

    if he is not here i know that he has someone outthere for me..there in the galaxy and beyond.


    ''He makes thinks new""

    and i believe if i behave...

    he maybe have a planet ..with beautifull sea,s nd valeys...
    with a man who is my other half ..waiting for me.....

    maybe even a merman (you know not a mermaid but a merman....you know .....(i even had visions about it


    i mean god is mighty he can create everything he want...




    untill that time i hold on to that love i never knew and will never see for he is to mighty for me to see him..





    and that other love warmth.....



    that will come.....








    much love to you poet....
    and be strong ..

    youre not alone in this feeling...






    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I could feel the enegry in this scribe...i likes!!!

    Peace
    Angel
     
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