Black Poetry : a love chemistry....evaluated

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Mar 30, 2001.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re+lo, al+ve= realove
    for i equate love to math
    thinking of you and how we balance love's equations
    and draw graphs on the earth in the garden
    of
    serenity...
    simplifying divinity
    we find our identities as our bodies intersect to create
    a perfect symmetry
    geo-wet-ric lines of infinity i draw on your honeybrown
    diagram wet massaging your neck and waist near the soft vicinity

    dim red light and soft music coordinate with our mental and physical congruences
    lip parallelisms lead us to foreplay as we lay..
    my tongue enters in your wet 'conic' section
    as you show tongue affection to my ninety degree erection..
    show me
    for i show you a new direction

    for tonight i want to be your greatest common factor
    measure the degrees of my love with your heart's protractor
    as rational numbers of nights are in the brackets of our future thereby ridding the (ex) variables of our past expressions
    finding greater values in one another for i never could find a settled area and base in a 180 degree love triangle
    however
    i find in our circle of 360 degrees of love a resting radius
    that remains

    i feel the remains of 4ever as your breasts are pressed
    against my chest
    with you on top your thighs are being caressed out of the heat of pleasure
    i go deeper, deeper, deeper into your pink treasure dimensions as we reach the extremums of climax not even math could measure..

    a love chemistry
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Wellllll !!!!

    Go 'head J'hiah !!!!!

    i'm scared ...
    fainting ...

    somebody fan me pleeeeeze!!!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. Nita

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    Heeeeey!!!!! :hot:
    You make me see math in a WHOLE new light.
    This was Supa Tight.
    You + Me = ETERNITY :lovestruc:
    :kiss: :kiss:
     
  4. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Oh My Gooodness

    where is the expression for mouth wide open?

    U ARE SO BAAAD!

    but i like it :love:

    love chemistry (u+me=us) :wink:
     
  5. dnommo

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    ***tripping over the fainting women***

    bro, i'm watching from across the brook and all i see is rowboats full of woman trying to get to you...it looks like a scene out of SURVIVOR :lol: man this is :hot: and as always i respect the one who wields the pen.

    keep 'em comin'

    ***selling maps to your serenity***
     
  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    J'Hiah,

    Now ya know this be :hot: right??!!??

    I'm with D'Mo, I don't wanna hafta trip over these sistahs up in here no mo!!! LOL!!!

    But continue ta do ya thing man!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  7. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Respect!

    Plain and simple. This is a really tight verse, and your use of math as a platform is superb. Ya gots skillz, and I am still tryna get you to come post some of this dope stuff on ma site. Here's the URL again.
    http://pub31.ezboard.com/boblahdeepoetryforum
    Grace the board bro'

    One Love.
     
  8. poeticdelight

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    Red or White

    a love chemistry
    re-evaluated
    reciprocated
    in full
    innermost details
    exposed lying
    gently on petals
    pulled from a
    white stemmed rose
    for friendship
    red stemmed rose
    for courtship
    making this a hardship
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ohhhh

    yesssssssssss! :)

    Thank you jh!!

    A
     
  10. Ms_MochaB

    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    J'hiah ... I'm speechless ...

    Ummm ... the metric system never meant so much to me ... probably because it never included the words that were inbedded in ONLY you ... Now I understand

    Thank you ...

    *Let's make poetry again sometime ... I enjoyed US*
     
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