Black Poetry : a looooooooooooooooong poem!

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  1. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    longass days
    make for blunts that blaze
    for a longass time while i
    coordinate my lines

    longass days call for
    longass blunts that blaze
    b4 longass showers
    that last a longass hour

    truly speaking
     
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    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This...

    ...is just plain hot...
    'Nuff said'...:D
     
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    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm glad

    u felt me reachin out. thanx for feelin it.
     
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    initially, the title threw me...

    given that my time is short, i overlooked this one. glad i came back to it...coz des longass days keep a brutha in a haze...got me thinking of all the ways...to find the path up outta this maze.

    THANKS FOR FLOW'N, hi-wa.
    i see i gotta keep my eyes on you.
     
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    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeh, ...

    u gotta watch me.

    i gottafew triks up my sleeve
    some of the things my mind breeds
    are simplywhat i perceive
    as a truer concept of life
    or strife
    whichever u decide to
    say is right
    but proceed thru with caution
    don't stumble over a deep thought
    and be left in exhaustion
     
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    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just, tried...

    to change it up a lil
    bit.
    hopulikedit.
    be eazy.
     
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