Black Poetry : A long day

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by kente417mojo, Feb 5, 2004.

  1. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I should be working
    tons of it to do
    but I'm sitting here dreaming
    I wonder about who?
    Can't keep my attention on the screen
    it's only focused on what's in your jeans
    focused on the moans as you receive
    every single inch of me
    I wish it was quiting time, I can't wait
    to lay you down, no time to kick off your shoes
    holding your hands above your head
    I can feel the warmth between as you move
    every kiss on your neck turns you another direction
    affection and love, bottled up all day
    now you know I hate when your away
    your soft voice haunts me like an entity
    long curly hair is gonna be the death of me
    your too fine for words
     
  2. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww, that was sweet. dont worry, u'll b home soon enough.tyte drop. much love :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed home bound in a few let da wondering be
    dis was very very nice piece of art
     
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    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm here working and didn't need to see this one but I like the way you evoke your need for your fem!
     
  5. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Horray, it's quiting time. Time to go home people (On the West at least). Thanks for the responses and the love. Can't write these without the love from the ladies.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like this scribe to the lucky lady awaiting you, keep flowin.
     
  7. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :devil: SO SO hot and sweet! much love to you!
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ah yes..this is soulfully deep indeed
    nice
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  9. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blue, True and Watz...thank you for your comments. I appreciate it very much as I do all comments. Thanks for the love everyone.
     
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    :geek: it's quitting time.... :toast:
    the anticipation was a unbearable
    love the way you crafted this... ;)
     
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