Black Poetry : A Lonely Night

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  1. lilcutie

    lilcutie Active Member MEMBER

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    Images running through my mind
    Of you and me
    Doing nasty things
    Thoughts of you
    Got me going crazy

    i roll over
    and try to fall asleep
    but whenever i close my eyes
    all i see
    is you
    caressing me
    o so gently
    you kissing me
    in places i havent been kissed before
    Passionate love making
    moans and screams for more

    Me doing things
    That normally wouldn't cross my mind
    Thoughts having me
    growing ever so wet
    Think of you stroking me
    in places no other has touch
    Places o so sacred

    In every postion possible
    I imagined you and I
    Me roaming your body
    Searching for new ways to please you
    Dancing seducively
    To the Slow Jamz
    Flowing from the radio

    I sit up in my bed
    weting from my own dream
    and decide to give you a call
    Swifly changing and lighting candles
    Eagerly awaiting for you to arrive
    A quiet knock on the door.....


    ~To Be Continued~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dreamz from erotic measure of pleasure as he Arrives
    knock knock !!! waiting on pt.2 of lonely night.........
    tyte heated drop lilcutie
     
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    BrownEyed Girly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so beautiful...i could see every word. much love to you for this beautiful flow.
     
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    Yes yes this looks lilke the beginning of something very seductive I can't wait to read the continuation of this piece. Keep flowin' strong my sistah.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Definitely a sensual piece that makes the reader look forward to the next installment. Do flow on....
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nicely posed awaiting part 2
     
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