Black Poetry : A Little Something

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by jelli, Jul 2, 2002.

  1. jelli

    jelli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here is a little something I threw together..enjoy...I know it doesn't compare to some of you seasoned poets out there but I had to get my feet wet again.

    It has been a longtime
    Since I‘ve submitted a verse or rhyme.
    Just because I’m up in the nights “wee” hours
    I thought I’d drop a small lyrical shower.
    Just some words that are thrown together
    To say hello to whomever
    Stops on in for glimpse or glance.
    I hope that I am given a chance
    To express my self and to flow
    I hope that my words will give you a show

    ;)
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey jelli

    i got the peanut budda ha ha ha. a lot of us be up in the wee hours of the morn..... Hey how you doin? welcome to the house and all that.




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  3. jelli

    jelli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks...I've posted here about a year ago but it sort of fell off. I plan to post more.....thanks for PB..:facelick:
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhh

    just keep dropin' em'. i liked the lil something you posted. looking foward to readin more.



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  5. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What's poppin Jelli?

    I remember seeing your name but it has been a minute... Diggin ya freestyle and alla dat!

    Reas
     
  6. misty

    misty Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Short and Sweet. Very nice Flow..
    Welcome Back

    Misty
     
  7. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: I agree
    short ,sweet and well worth the read ! :)
    definatley looking forward to more
     
  8. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE FLOW!

    Come often and share your rhyme
    lovely lyrics leave anytime
    put a little something on our mind
    Thank you for taking the time!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
  9. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome back!!!

    from flyte i see ya flow i remember ya show
    hit us wit mo , welcome home where u belong
    drop dem scribes as u vibe to da beat of our
    street in Destee's place go head jelli flow on
    :toast: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :jumping:
     
  10. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow
    and welcome back
     
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