Black Poetry : A Little Piece about a Piece

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Jul 23, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The rhythm oh so sensual
    The sounds are unintelligable
    Deep is the touch
    I want you so much
    My love will stay hardened
    Inside your sweet garden
    Uncontrolled we will get
    As we make each other wet
    All is lost
    In our sexual groove
    Hold me tight
    The earth will move

    BE
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ugh ugh ugh

    very descriptive, indeed, Poet.

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WATCH YA SELF I SEE A LITTLE EROTIC STUFF
    ABOUT TO HAPPEN!!:D
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm trying to figure out how you got all dhat up in dhat. You right about one thing..A piece within a piece... :lol: I must say...I job Well Done!!!!:toast:
     
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