Black Poetry : A Little E&R (Conversations In Georgia)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Apr 11, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we spoke over Nehi peach sodas
    and a warm slice of pecan pie
    pie with vanilla Ice cream...

    talking about love and it's
    two main sides E & R.......

    watching her converse and break down
    her philosophy on love "southern style"
    I wondered how ice cream would react
    on her shoulder blade...I should have been
    paying closer attention to what she
    said but pleasing her was important
    to me...I was visiting for only
    a short while as I was from the North

    I interjected while she was discussing
    the etymology of eros "what would
    you do if I..." before I finished
    I placed the ice cream on shoulder
    and watched it dip over the contours
    of her and sliding down the spaghetti
    strings of her chiffon top, it stopped
    in the chalice of her navel, she had an
    "innie" so in my tongue went...her
    next comment was of a foreign nature
    and all natures creatures.....watched
    as I drank

    we were supposed to discuss E&R
    over Nehi sodas and pecan pie

    on the porch she lay fluid
    relaxed waiting to be tasted again
    I threw rocks
    at the sky shattering the stars
    leaving us with only the moonlight
    to guide us and there we were
    on stage no camera but ecstasy-rated
    I the lead actor her the
    Carmen Jones of Georgia laying there
    I resumed my position and slipped
    a moan in her soul she became more
    intoxicated at each whip of my
    tongue...I wished I was her at that
    moment cause I'm good...but I lived
    vicariously through her escaping sweat
    evidence of excitements existence

    we were supposed to discuss E&R over
    Nehi sodas and pecan pie

    I told her that Love's two main sides
    was not Eroticism and Romance but
    she..........I..........her.........me
    us.....we

    (to be continued)

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERB...

    (to be continued)...????

    you've gotta be kiddin'... ryght? 'cause i for
    one don't think i can take anymore!!... :wink:

    & the title... it is tyght to death!!

    keepdoinyourthangbaby!!... (lol)

    AlwaysLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  3. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ***shaking my head once again***

    you ability to pain such a picture allows me to sit on the front seat for the premiere of this movie. i can see it all so clear...

    vivid imagery scooped up like the ice cream on her shoulder...

    excelletn my friend...pure excellence
     
  4. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    always

    captivating word-age! I kinda like the title too, bv. :)

    A
     
  5. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    waiting

    in anticipation for the continuation of a little E&R...
     
  6. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You
    Defy
    The limits
    Of
    Word
    But
    Take me
    To
    The edge
    So I
    Can see
    The
    Mysteries
    Of
    Your
    World

    You are "Excellence"!!!

    *nuestra-mundo*
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oldie but hottie

    I threw rocks
    at the sky shattering the stars
    leaving us with only the moonlight
    to guide us and there we were
    on stage no camera but ecstasy-rated
    I the lead actor her the
    Carmen Jones ...QQ

    i love the way you brought this....
    nice hot drop
    Peace
    Angel

    ps where you be at!~!!!!!
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great one to bring back blkangel, and yes, where is he? This had such an earthy, personal quality to it, along with the spice of sensuality....this poet has a flair for descriptive verse.
     
  9. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS, this was,......this was so.........

    ummn, I don't have a word for it right now. I'l just bow down, brother. Excellent piece. :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
  10. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spinn: Wonderful write brother verb I havent see u in awhile where u at bro? We about to send out the milk carton joint on ya! :look:
     
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