Black Poetry : A little bit of me!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by msluciousb, Dec 21, 2002.

  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lining up my words to make them presentable.
    Hoping to represent all that is representable.
    Finding my words insufficient and sometimes
    nonsensical some of the poems become some
    what whimsical.
    Sharing the heart of what makes MSLuciousB
    who she be. A peep into my world of selective
    Poetry.

    Shining through your praises , my head raises
    as I know humility has it's time and it's place
    the week is short somehow I feel as though
    I am in a race. To leave something behind that
    will keep your mind clicking, listen closely my
    brotha's and sista's the clock is ticking.

    Reminding that we are all God's vessels to
    share what we know and seek more truth
    and knowledge not just like high school and
    nothing like college there is great evolutionary
    change in Collective knowledge.

    Remembering that we are great because we
    deem it necessary to do what is unthinkable
    to some and that is to expose our inner most
    thought and emotions to all that come to read.
    Some will share our sentiment, and some will
    mark up with mental red pens until our poetry
    bleeds.

    Exiting the stage for the moment, but never
    exiting this place. As long as I have a rhyme and
    a reason...you will see my poetic face. I bow
    in humility for this opportunity it's stretching
    has caused me much growth. And what I enjoyed
    more than anything is that you all seemed to enjoy
    it to the utmost!

    Taking a final bow as the curtain comes down, all
    my sista and brotha scribes gather round , I feel
    warm arms and hearts beating as a symbolic group
    hug enfolds me...Thanks for letting me have the chance
    to be myself and for now this will have to hold me!
    And as always in parting I must espouse...
    Blessing on each and every one's house!

    BJS(C)2002
     
  2. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Right on, msluciousb:) I really enjoy reading your work, and i like to thankyou for always looking out for da family and keeping us strong. U're tha stem that neva breaks up our family. Also, in your fifth stanza where it says exiting... in your second line, you left out an i in exiting.:)

    Much luv,

    Aaliyahmonet
     
  3. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dope

    one luv
     
  4. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tru tru
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    WHOODIE-HOO! Poet, YOU BETTA SPEAK!

    THIS WAS FANTASTIC!

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    A bit that stood out a lot ...word up and well felt
     
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