Black Poetry : A little bit closer

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she said she wanted to get closer
    Just a little bit closer
    but as her fingers began to venture
    down my spine, I could feel the tingle
    that her moisten pearl
    was trying to give

    And I, I always aim to please
    but see, don't get me wrong
    I don't just want to make
    love to your physical
    but to your mental too...

    So come closer,
    just a little bit closer

    and let me hypnotize you
    with thoughts of pure
    erotic injections of affections
    that will leave your body
    contemplating with one thought
    that visualizes my manhood
    entering your blissful womb

    So baby come closer,
    Just a little bit closer

    See I wanna take you on ride
    where your mental can relax
    and you physical in tune
    with your spiritual

    the type of ride where
    you can only imagine
    what if would be like
    having me entering you

    so come a little closer
    baby just a little bit closer

    Can you feel it?
    The way my thoughts
    are entering yours
    its like I am a cosmic force
    that stimulates your universe
    making you go into
    a super nova
    and exploding with pleasure

    See you can't even phantom
    the blessings that
    I am willing to bestow on you
    I may not be G_d,
    but baby, please believe
    that I am G-d Like

    Mira mami, come closer
    just a little bit closer

    Cause I want us both
    to go to that tantric explosion
    where everything
    in the heavens move
    because all I wanted
    was for you to
    come even a little bit closer
    then you wanted me.

    so baby, just cum
    a little bit closer
    on me.​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out now because she gonna get closer then close
    this was red hot !
     
  3. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thats whats up Rich, thanks for the love....
     
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    i can cum a little closer
    as you grab me by the shoulder

    as you lead me to the corridor
    you xplore

    with you fingers where i wont mention
    you gladly giving it some attention

    as the fingers move in smooth stroke
    dont consider my lines as joke

    because baby tonyte will be like no other
    as tonyte will be getting

    A little bit closer (wink, wink)
     
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    she said she wanted to get closer
    Just a little bit closer
    but as her fingers began to venture
    down my spine, I could feel the tingle
    that her moisten pearl
    was trying to give

    And I, I always aim to please
    but see, don't get me wrong
    I don't just want to make
    love to your physical
    but to your mental too...

    So come closer,
    just a little bit closer

    and let me hypnotize you
    with thoughts of pure
    erotic injections of affections
    that will leave your body
    contemplating with one thought
    that visualizes my manhood
    entering your blissful womb

    So baby come closer,
    Just a little bit closer

    See I wanna take you on ride
    where your mental can relax
    and you physical in tune
    with your spiritual

    the type of ride where
    you can only imagine
    what if would be like
    having me entering you

    so come a little closer
    baby just a little bit closer

    Can you feel it?
    The way my thoughts
    are entering yours
    its like I am a cosmic force
    that stimulates your universe
    making you go into
    a super nova
    and exploding with pleasure

    See you can't even phantom
    the blessings that
    I am willing to bestow on you
    I may not be G_d,
    but baby, please believe
    that I am G-d Like

    Mira mami, come closer
    just a little bit closer

    Cause I want us both
    to go to that tantric explosion
    where everything
    in the heavens move
    because all I wanted
    was for you to
    come even a little bit closer
    then you wanted me.

    so baby, just cum
    a little bit closer
    on me.


    Nevar

    i can cum a little closer
    as you grab me by the shoulder
    as you lead me to the corridor
    you xplore

    with you fingers where i wont mention
    you gladly giving it some attention
    as the fingers move in smooth stroke
    dont consider my lines as joke

    because baby tonyte will be like no other
    as tonyte will be getting

    A little bit closer (wink, wink)
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you giving me some erotic thoughts
    this cant be bought
    as i sought

    out you
    cum in me boo

    as you cum on my mind
    thanks for the time

    you giving me
    set my mind and body and free
    completely

    as i take these lustful injections
    no big xpectations

    as i let you feel me
    lets see

    who can make who weak
    love me down to my feet

    as you and me

    Get a little bit closer!!!!!!
     
  7. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thats whats up keep the flow going... Next...
     
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    Defiant;
    Very very HOTT DROP. I'm lovin' it.
    Much Luv
     
  9. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks ma, I enjoyed writing it
     
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    Shhhhh....dayum... I didn't know that you could flow like this, "Mira, mami" ?uh-oh! ha ha ha... I especially like the part where you said, "Can you feel it?
    The way my thoughts
    are entering yours
    its like I am a cosmic force
    that stimulates your universe
    making you go into
    a super nova
    and exploding with pleasure "

    man that was hot... luvin the way you write, dawg just deep and open, truth be told- keep it coming...
    D.S.
     
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