Black Poetry : A little bit closer Part II

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A little bit closer Part II

    See, she laid there
    sleeping like an angle
    and I was amazed by her slumber
    even her snoring
    was amazing to me
    and all I want her to do
    was just to come a closer
    just a little bit closer

    And then just at dusk
    I felt her body
    moving closer to me
    her back side
    was grinding
    on my morning wood
    So I told her
    baby come closer,
    I need you to come
    just a little bit closer

    See, there was no need
    for is to strip off our cloth
    cause both of us was already
    sleeping in the buff
    and then I felt her hand
    guiding mine to her promised land
    and as I was touching
    her moistened womb
    I could feel
    my morning wood throbbing

    And with a slightly moaning
    tone within my voice
    I said, ayed yo mijo mami
    ben aqui
    come closer,
    mami just a little bit closer

    Sex with her wasn't just average
    it was like WMD's exploding
    causing a nuclear holocaust
    and then, then she climbed on top of me
    swaying her hips in a circular motion
    and rotating a grinding on my manhood

    I could feel the top of her canal
    with each thrust that I was giving
    and she was coming
    closer and closer
    to her orgasmic peak
    with each thrust I was injecting
    while she was riding me

    and then it happened
    she stopped and I was like
    sweetheart come closer
    just a little bit closer

    but she wasn’t done yet
    she garbed my member
    and started gently messaging it
    first with her hand
    and then she started licking
    soon that turned in to kissing
    which lead in to her
    messaging my manhood
    with her lips and tongue
    devouring it like my wood
    was a pop cycle
    It was amazing the skills she had

    And then she stopped again
    This time only to tell me
    Baby come closer
    Just a little bit closer

    And I couldn’t resist her
    I gently laid her on her back
    Taking the tip of my manhood
    And started to tease her clitoris
    Slightly injecting the tip of my head
    In side of her
    She began to moan
    And to me it sounded
    Like the most beautiful song
    That I have ever heard
    It sounded like angels
    Where singing

    And then she started to climax
    Telling me baby come closer
    Just a little bit closer

    I could feel her moisten pearl
    Starting to get tighter and tighter
    It felt as she lost control of her
    Vaginal muscles
    And then, it happened
    She came like a hurricane
    Flooding up the sheets
    Her eyes rolled in the back of her head
    Talking about Papi, papi
    Te amo, tu mi amore

    And then I slightly kissed her on her forhead
    Moving towards her lips
    Kissed them and then
    I ventured towards her
    Beautifully firmed breast
    Made love to them with kisses of passion
    Slowly licking my way towards
    Her belly button
    While my had was messaging her womanhood
    And with each step closer towards her womb
    She said Papi come closer
    Just a little bit closer

    So there I was, tasting her fruit
    As my tongue messaged her ****
    In a circular motion
    Getting wetter by the minute
    And then again she came
    And I didn’t care
    Cause to me her juices
    Tasted like the sweetest fruit juice
    I have ever had
    And then she stopped me

    Talking about papi
    Come closer just a little bit closer
    And hold me…..


    I felt a part 2 was neccessary. Cause we as men usually only focus on our own selfish motives this one is about pleasing the woman. I felt it was neccessary to so.
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here it is, 6am and I'm looking for a cold drink. This was pure fire, your uh, attention to detail was amazing. I'm sure the woman in your life appreciates that, and always wants you to, come A Little Bit Closer. Who lit the flame in this forum? lol
     
  3. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wrote a part one to this you should check that out. No woman in my life at this time. Just went back in to my memory and thought about a paticular one and the way it was for both of us. Thanks for the love though ma.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Defiant:
    OOOOOHHH BABY.....NOW YOU KNOW YOU JUST DID THE D***THANG!!!
    This was sensually and totally sexy. Luvn' this flo.
     
  5. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ohh my goodness... defiantson... sug.. this is too too much... i was leaning in so dang close and if i didn't have a flashing image to snacht me back... i prolly woulda fell over 4ever... lol... lol... i likes... i likes...


    <from the megaphone $vever keeps under her bed (u know that one is freaky...lol)clears throat>

    Ladies manny is single!!! lol...

    nice drop poet... flow on
     
  6. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    uhhhhhhhh papi can i get this live i mean spoken that is caliente baby caliente
     
  7. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow... thats whats up.... thanks all..
     
  8. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ifucomesoftly, why you got to put me on blast like that ma??? lol but it is true though. I have a very vivid imagenation....
     
  9. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lmao... defianston.... cause.. you keep giving these ladies what they wnat to hear somebody's gonna want a piece... lol... like nevar... lmao... i am putting errrrrrrybody on blast... lmao... serious though... it's all love poet...
     
  10. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you on that. But hey what can I say... I am a not really a poet I am a spoke word artist or as they say a spoken word performer.
     
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