Black Poetry : A letter to poetry

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  1. Soullyricist

    Soullyricist Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It’s been a minute since we’ve seen each other and ****, I have missed you
    I don’t know what makes me continuously think that you are this for the moment high that penetrates my mind and then I can just
    let you go
    Simple
    I let go and then return to you when the world stops turning and my insides begin yearning to see your elusive simplicity
    And you never deny me
    You look at me maybe a word closer to perfection
    And then I get caught up for a day, or an hour
    In my obsession for you
    I lose you
    Then grab you
    Loose you
    Then produce you
    Every time my insides begin yearning to see your elusive simplicity
    And you just smile back at me
    Like you knew it all along
    You knew I couldn’t stay away
    Or chase some other interest for prey
    And it hurts like thunder every time I return
    To take a peek at your enhancements
    And to see others embrace you with love and romantics
    I need you
    You don’t need me
    But as soon as I can find a way to develop some form of obsessive simplicity
    You will need me too
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very very nice...
     
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    this was nice
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o' yes feelin dis here poetry in love
    tyte scribe
     
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    i like this
    truthful
     
  6. UniverSouL

    UniverSouL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great poem Soullyricist!

    This poem has flavor and depth.

    Nice work poet.

    Peace,
    UniverSouL
     
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