Black Poetry : A Letter to Jay-Z

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  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    how can i love this woman

    without looking crazy?

    how can i think of her

    without assumin' her heart's only lazy

    because her vision of my soul is too hazy

    to amaze me with her home cookin'

    she's so good looking

    i'd be more than happy to ask her out to cross our forge

    to forge a friendship

    but that route to Pigeon Forge

    keeps her guessing



    love,

    howard
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    your creativity is awesome
     
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    Great word play howard, just do you.
     
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    liked this part where you said, "how can I love this woman, without looking crazy?"

    Mayne, straight to tha point howard. Feel you. and your creative style is so amazing.

    blessings,
    Desert Storm
     
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