Black Poetry : A Letter to Da Unknown

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Upon thy crown and blessing of my life
    under much luv to be husband seeking thy wife
    where such constant of passion forth her art
    to enter the walls of her graceful sweet heart
    through da world my proof will be of discovers
    all da beauty cascading tweed us as lovers
    caressin compassion i so giveth as due
    and yes her purity of warmth my soul will persue
    drifting deeper inside her eyes
    where spoken truth and never lies

    Judge not my great passion by yet my spool skillz
    but da joy of sensually embracing to give u thrillz
    let not my wait be of foreverness
    forth i stain the space in life long happiness
    thee cometh from da luv i behold
    inside our cocoon is what i mold
    kissing da thoughts of you
    leave a feeling beyond any clue
    yet thinking how we will become bond as glue

    On thy page i pen my luv
    through da message from above
    seal my soul upon ya throne
    where rapture abid my home
    you know who writes and tis whom read
    da pleasure of hearts sharing deed
    i so leave this to whom she be
    and await her day she cometh to thee
    my love is a shhhhhh ! sweet rush
    and deeper in a captive hush
    :fyi: :kiss1:
    P.s Da letter of unknown
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amid the beauty and warmth
    of each and every word
    is the loveliest ballad
    she has ever heard
    No harps strummed
    nor violins played
    compare to the notes composed
    within the message conveyed
    in a letter to da unknown


    Such a beautiful write.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes watz like sweet hush dats giving me a head rush as the letter lay still.
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bus: hey bro'...you are still doing your thing and i think i'm gonna jump back on da bus...
    this is a nice read...
     
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    $$RICH$$:
    Oh how I wish I could convey to thee
    how beautiful and sweet your words
    are to me. This is truely a lovely write.

    Much Luv
     
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    hey brother D man nice to see you thankz for the visit and read man...

    4EVERLUV...
    unconditionally openly
    cometh of thee
    where i await your arrival
    Thank u sis
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    uh huh

    my love is a shhhhhh ! sweet rush
    and deeper in a captive hush


    yea playa i see your

    for real

    lol
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lol.......man i learned it from u ....
     
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