Black Poetry : A Letter to da Miss

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    My Love

    I sit today in solo view
    inside my chamber
    i scribe to canvas my
    love

    i write this letter to u
    of my love
    a token of my heart
    i speak upon u
    my soul becomes part of u

    i sit in the frozen zone of
    gentle compassion
    my dearest sweetheart
    i beloveth in u so deep
    i fall weak from the unique
    beings of tender love

    i write I :heart: U
    not for today nor from yesterday
    not even in tomorrow but love
    u each day i awaken wit these
    thoughts of u
    i write this letter of my heart
    to tell u how i care and lone 4 u
    i pen my name only see yours
    poetically sprayed cross my page

    inside my vision u lay so near
    the embarace of notions
    caresses me into a smile from
    the far reigon where love sit
    to be felt and compassionate
    mentals touchies close
    without handz i feel u
    my love rumble like shockwaves
    the ground shake like a earthquick
    the depth of dis motional love
    rattles like thunder boltz
    my love ..........
    unto u in the moment of depth
    is so heart warming i lash out
    close my eyes and let my lips
    continue to speak from my heart
    I
    :heart:
    U

    all Rights Reserved 2000
    $R
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ricjh...this was so beautiful...I can tell from the get go that your person who loves being in love!! It's a beautiful thing . I just wanted to drop off a quote to you that I read in a book
    "We love once, we love deep, we love for all time"

    Keep up the beauty of your sribe :)

    1,
    SwtNess
     
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    absolutely breath taking! the magnitude of your love is worldwide.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    swtT............... i truely thank u your words to me is a blessing

    purplemoons....... u have da gentle heart my sista and a love
    unthinkable u bless me so and ur words means so much to me
    i Thank u with tender lovin care
     
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    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful... absolutely beautiful brotha... keep it flowin :)

    peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    unto u my beautiful sistah .......Thank u 4 da read and sweet
    wordz that means much to my heart
     
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    Wonderful

    Awwww Rich this was so beautiful, love is a beautiful thing, when shared by two hearts that can emerge to one.... Loving the flow and the warmth pure essence of love....

    Keep expressing yourself and whats inside that wonderful heart of yours!

    AqueenPassing
    :wave:
     
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    Thank u sistah ......i try to let it all out
     
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    Rich, your poetic voice calls on love like Barry White!
     
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    or dat old skool cat sam cooke...
     
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