Black Poetry : A Letter To A Whore I Knew

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  1. Matt4Jack

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    by poetryality on January 3, 2008.
    © All rights Reserved - Renee Matthews-Jackson



    You beguiled me into submission!

    I tripped over your whorish behaviors,
    lusted after the fact.

    Had I known you stuck your extension
    in every hole that opened itself to you,
    I would have run as far away as humanly possible.

    And you said you trusted me!
    I laugh in afterthought (hindsight).
    Why didn't I think to mistrust you,
    now that I know you were/are a fiend?

    Thrusting your mannish-self
    upon far too many women
    to even remember names,
    and you have a wife
    that you spill residue into?

    Maybe I should make her aware
    of your affairs.
    Call her, and give a list
    of all the ladies of the night
    you have entertained for years.
    Poor believers in your lies.

    I think she deserves to know
    how many pieces
    you've penetrated with your cunning.
    How many different tastes
    have been on your tongue,
    all the varied scents of perfumed posture...
    Sickening aromas of misbegotten avarice.

    Then again, in my hip pocket
    I've got your phone messages,
    which you keep so that you can listen
    over and over, and smile at your triumph.
    Or so you think you're triumphant.
    I think you're a sex-crazed fool
    who is eagerly searching
    for a way to die.

    I think you will get what's coming to you.
    You can't keep burning women
    and possibly men,
    because who knows
    what you screw.
    Animal, vegetable, or mineral,
    it's all the same to you.
    There are no feelings
    from your touch.

    You are a demon,
    and you're truly not a good lay at all.
    How I fell pray to your sick devices
    is beyond my comprehension.
    I won't spend time trying to figure.
    I'll just get another test;
    to make sure
    you're infectious habits
    have not tainted the goodness in me.
    You'd better get your wife tested too.

    I'm simply waiting for karma
    to come sit next to you
    and point its finger square in your face.
    Waiting for the come around affect
    to wreck you into oblivion.
    You're too old
    to act as you do.
    At some point the grip of reality
    is going to choke you into your last breath.
    I hope you see all the faces you've betrayed
    right before you meet your maker, love.







    Author notes:

    This is called Progressive Poetry.
    Each stanza adds a line beginning with one line, then two, and so on...
    This poem is progressively written into 11 stanzas.

    Life bites! Make sure to keep your shots updated.
     
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    uuummmmm.....and this pertains to your name???????
    :qqb010:
    I like the progressive effect though!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    manye.. can't say i understand...
    why u dropp'd this flow right here...
    this one right here's a name game...
    I'm Miss Lady if u unaware...

    Miss Lady is a lady
    A lady that is fair
    And I know this don't sound lady-like
    but Miss Lady doesn't care

    You were sleepin with somebody's man
    and u knew he had a wife..
    That ain't bein a Miss Lady..
    two wrongs never make a right..

    So if u really wanna be a Lady..
    A Miss Lady that is real...
    u said urself .. he got a wife..

    A

    Miss Lady.....

    Would care how SHE feel.
     
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    Matt4Jack thank u for this great flow ware as it was moved to it's
    own thread let me just add that Links not allowed in Poetry Rule #5
    http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8084
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    Often we don't find out the truth about someone before it's too late. Then we want to kick ourselves, thinking that surely there must have been some clues. There are some who have almost perfected the act of lying, but they'll get their due. You drove your point home here.
     
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    very creative poem, this style isn't easy, yet you master the form
    keep bringing it. awesome peice.

    Peace~N~Love
     
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