Black Poetry : A letter found year 1808

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    standing at the end of da road
    waiting on tyme within
    the emotional feeling looms
    i sit at the stillness of darkness
    i watch the fire stars shoot
    the moon cross path to half
    in a galaxy maze da vision
    of hope is unfolded before me

    soon da comfort to caress begun
    hope is alive
    the cares cast ova millions of miles
    a smile pose
    in one hand a red rose
    in the other a book
    what was cold not fill wit warmth
    now i am here
    always will be unto u
    i offer my hand , my loveth and heart
    soulfully in da essence of ya beauty
    da beauty u imbedded in hearts
    is graced and prayers cast cross
    the air maze....
    in one sweep their was light
    so get up and move around
    ya troubles be no more
    ya pain is caressed
    ya mind is comfort
    just think of me and ask
    i'll be beside u if u believe

    tyme will tell....................

    from above i watch ....:)
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    unique and beautiful scribe...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz .......something running through my head
     
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    I must agree with Lovely, this is unique!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it was a mental flow i was just thinking !
    Thankz
     
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    as i continue thinking this play again so i upped it again
     
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    Keep thinkin out loud, $$RICH$$. Love it.
     
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    Something beautiful from a beautiful mind!

    As always I am uplifted and always surprised at the form , substance and directions that your poems take.
    I love to read you on a lonely evening to remind myself as I have said before...
    "The heart of a poet beats with in the soul of a black man". You are a blessing!

    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE!
     
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    this was so touching
    yes, right to the soul
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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    MsB.......likewise sistah coz u bring warmth to the house as well
    thank u

    Blue...your words means so much as the soul caress them
    thank u
     
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