Black Poetry : A Letta To A Dream

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  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    For yeas I’ve sat here
    Wondering just where you are
    Just how you are
    I peek through the fog of the city
    Searching…
    Searching for that one shining star
    Sometimes it’s too dark
    Too much gloom and smog
    So I run…
    Run to a distant place
    Just to find a crack
    A crack in the sky
    Where the moon reflects
    Giving me a beacon of light
    A twinkle of a little eye
    In the monstrous face
    Of an infinite sky
    I finally see it
    A lone star
    A place where I can lay to rest my questions
    Where I can put my hope of seeing you
    Leaving that dream in a star
    I wait for the moon to show my star
    Praying it return with an answer of reason
    So I wait
    And wait
    Living out my days as I should
    Trying not to carry
    The burden of needing you
    But I see myself asking
    Will I ever see you again?
    So I can open the chest of my heart’s desires
    And finally learn of questions passed
    As I speak out
    Find this letter
    And reply
    By relieving yourself
    From the clouds of insanity
    And as I leave you
    I surrender my deepest chattel
    Hope
    Hope is what guides us
    Though the trouble of the day
    Or the follies of the night
    This gives us the ability
    To look out
    Stare out amongst the heavens
    And not be weary
    Hope is all I have
    And hope is what I give to you

    With all the pieces of my heart
    Yours truly

    Aaliyahmonet

    :D
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aaliyah
    This is a very sweet poem. When you finally find that special someone. It is well worth the effort to spend all your love and energy into them. Very nice flow indeed.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully pose'd and to that wonderful someone u dreameth of
    tyte write sis.....
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww, this was sweet indeed, filled with such hope for a love to see. Nice to read you again, flow on.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Diggin this gentle flow, girl.
     
  6. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thankyou All

    I want to thank all of you for your responses. As u may see, i'm starting to come back, and i'm glad that i'm back once again.


    1 luv,

    AM :kiss:
     
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    this was beautifully written. Nice use of imagery.

    keep the flow goin.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aaliyahmonet, this beautiful scribe is hope personified.
     
  9. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sister .....:heart:


    this was sweet and beautifull....


    warm and heartfeld....


    ..

    yes sis we can only hope and try...in love
    and never give up hope in life in things in dreams...

    i dont...

    cause if you stop dreaming....
    and believing..
    than there is nothing...


    i,m glad that you are back...(yo yo yo)
    i have asked for you...(you never responded....
    do you rememberd you posted a poem libertylady)
    and i look a little sad now...
    like
    yeah what have i done wrong..






    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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