Black Poetry : A Language of My Own

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by enigma, Dec 3, 2003.

  1. enigma

    enigma Member MEMBER

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    As my thoughts transcend me and out of my spirit visions and dreams overflow,
    I write a language of complexity,
    I write what I know.
    Written images of the unseen, and love, and coveted dreams, I write mysteries upon mysteries of righteous things, of songs no one sings, of elements of man science can't bring.
    I write where many can't go, Why? Because they don't know what I know.
    I write what I know.
    As the nerves in my fingertips tingle with ideas and emotions, guiding the very instrument that will explain me,
    I write the very essence of a woman's soul and the secret dichotomies of the heart that invisibility shows
    I write what I know.
    Do you see, I write what I know?
    I write... but my pen speaks the language of me.
     
  2. Zen Master_1

    Zen Master_1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Unique language

    enigma, Your language in time will reveal the essence of you as many will cry out for your words to make them whole, just as with Jesus and many others whom walked the path. Yes, you were given that gift to express and your day will come, just like many before you.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello:wave: and Welcome to the family
    of love and embrace
    your own language this is so neat
    i love how you express it very nice
    looking forward to feeling more of your flow
    Peace
     
  4. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome Enigma :wave:
    this was so floetic :)
     
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    I'm truly diggin' your language.

    U had me from the very beginning, still wanting more.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: welcome to destee...
    this speack so sweet...and true...
    flow on please i likes
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to da fam!:wave:
     
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    You write what you know in a way that everyone can feel. Welcome to destee!
     
  9. enigma

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    Thank you all for your words of uplift and encouragement. It means more than the world to me.

    Much luv 2 all,
    E.
     
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