Black Poetry : A Lady

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  1. SoothinDivinity

    SoothinDivinity Active Member MEMBER

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    I haven't wrote in a while but here is something that I wrote a long time ago. Hope yall like it. :)

    Do you have the time?
    Cause I wanna explain the essence of me
    All that I've come to know and love
    I'm a Lady
    Rare
    Hard to find
    A lady with class and grace
    This stunning face and slim waist are just the case
    Holdin within something many hope to see or even be
    Honest
    Head always held high
    I never have a reason to lie
    Cause I value truth
    And carry proof that real women
    Strong Black Women still exist
    I understand that there are none like me
    Each and every lady has her own unique qualities
    But some waste them failing to recognize
    that you are what you see through your own eyes
    This world can't define you
    I'm glad I've come to realize
    The postive qualities that make me, me
    I nurture all that I've come to be
    I'm a Lady
    Having style
    Class
    and grace
    These things are just apart of me naturally
    When you pass me by you can't help but see
    That I value and love being me
    The confidence in my sway
    Make all to look my way
    Some wonder how they can get close to me
    So they can solve my inner mystery
    That thing that draws them to me....
    What is it?
    Looking so hard they fail to see
    that there drawn to me because I'm a lady.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yep! ur a Lady indeed this speaks within self
    flow on i'm listening
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We are all unique and special in our own way, often it is what lies within that intrigues others. Such a positive flow.
     
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    very deep and sweet a lady worth is untouched
    indeed a lady here ........................................
     
  5. SoothinDivinity

    SoothinDivinity Active Member MEMBER

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    Thanks! :)

    Thanks for the love Watz and Rich.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was made of elegance and love

    do you ,:)
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin this....
     
  8. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :heart: I,m Loving this to....






    thanks for reminding to tha lady,s!



    ""you must be a special lady.....
    ad a verry exciting girl"" :huh:


    (i said that to you sis ...its a line from a song)







    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
  9. SoothinDivinity

    SoothinDivinity Active Member MEMBER

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    Thanks

    Thanks for the love LibertyLady, LovelyGoldenOne, and SwtT. Your comments meant alot to me!
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: Lady

    This poem was written with alot of grace and eloquency. True ladies are
    known and seen. Excellent Job.
     
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