Black Poetry : A Kween Returns

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Feb 23, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The path to poetry's palace
    Lined with soldiers
    Eagerly they await
    A golden horse appears in the distance
    Moving gracefully
    It's rhythm more than a trot
    Sensual as it approaches
    The Kween enjoys the ride
    The soldiers smile
    But they never break rank
    They will whisper about her
    Once she's inside
    The drawbridge lowers
    The palace is alive
    All is prepared
    The Blk Kween has arrived

    WB,
    BE
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    ladies in waiting
    standing by
    what will she say as she rides by
    looking and searching
    where is the Kween
    waiting for flows that have yet to be seen
    where oh where is the Kween!

    :)

    very nice Heartbeat!
    had to bring this back to the top!

    :wink:
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yesssss!

    Hot ****--I like this--it well done--well deserved and well thought out--a great piece--short, sweet and full of imagery--loved it--Ra :toast:

    Come past my column today--Lesbian Lovers! :spinstar:
     
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    Nice ,I felt like I was there
    Nice Picture you've drawn for
    my imagination
    :peace:
    Much Luv
    Nita
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed she has and making a grand enter !
    tyte scribing brutha BE....
     
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    When a regal image draws near, all have to show homage. This scribe is poetry alright.
     
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