Quiet Poetry Lounge : A Kiss

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LadyBelle, Nov 23, 2008.

  1. LadyBelle

    LadyBelle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We dance this dance of wonder
    this slow groove
    slowly swaying carefully moving
    around craving and desire
    careful not to step to close to the edge
    The fall is fast and liberating
    but not free
    not yet
    our tongues have wings
    they dance
    whispering
    slowly swaying
    carefully flying inside
    craving and desire
    trying to seduce
    the heart
    the body
    and the soul
    to join this groove to fly
    :
    :smooch::smooch:
     
  2. Clyde C Coger Jr

    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!




    LadyBelle,

    Simply beautiful, LadyBelle, simply beautiful! The Kiss

    careful not to step to close to the edge
    The fall is fast and liberating
    but not free
    not yet


    Profound, indeed!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    At a magnitude so great

    handz abound lips lace'd
    dancin against da windz
    in a slow circle motion
    tongue twister
    spinning twriling
    delightfully embracing
    da moment of truth
    fancy free
    wings spread
    under seductional
    glaze seek da
    heart, body and soul
    to take flight
    :flirt:


    Awesome scribing sis love this kiss you so created from da depth of it's own slumber.
     
  4. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was truly beautiful LadyBelle...you created this visual, that was so inside this kiss, that made me want to kiss someone for a very long time...

    simply beautiful
     
  5. LadyBelle

    LadyBelle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet Apple Pie, Thank you lady....Sometimes there is nothing more sensual than a tender kiss....a touch only a lover can suffice
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    what a kiss!

    so spiritual, universal, beyond the flesh itself

    great work poet

    :bowdown:
     
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