Black Poetry : A Kiss

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  1. FattnBeautiful

    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stirring in each others eyes we move our faces closer together.
    Our lips touch with eagerness and anticipation.
    My hands in your hair
    Yours on my face
    I seductively suck and lick your bottom lip.
    I feel you tense against my body
    Your tongue penetrates my mouth and I feel the wetness against mine.
    We dance with our tongues
    Moving them in and out and around each others mouths.
    Exploring
    Knowing each other moves
    Our bodies pressed together
    I feel our hearts beat
    We moan in each others mouths
    as our movements begin to quicken
    You pull away and we began to catch our breaths
    We stair at on another with our eyes glazed over
    I lean in again
    I place my lips on yours
    and then
    We start again
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wet kiss of divine sweetness of feelings that make u say ummmmmm!!!
    two that enterlace in such tongue twist can be delightful.....................
     
  3. FattnBeautiful

    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes it can. Thank you.
     
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    Hey FattnBeautiful
    You really have expressed the mood of the kiss
    It can be so delightful, and so nice .
    Nice one

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    This is a seductively sweet flo....
    Flo on poet...
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ain't nothing nice...
    like doing it twice.
    I enjoyed the read poet.
     
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    Great word choice poetess, you put the reader right in the middle of a kiss. Quite descript.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    mmmmmm

    you are on fire poet:bingo:
     
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