Black Poetry : ? A.K.A Lost Inda Sauce

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PLATINUMILLITY1, Dec 14, 2007.

  1. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmm

    :?: I don't Know
    I'm lost in tha sauce
    I'm :?: Not sure where to go
    :qqb013:
    I love expression

    I melt in the art
    How Why come is it...that I feel like the Great Depression
    Like I am Experiencing the Drought
    Like I am:?: All Dried up

    All fried up n crispy
    This aint the same kinda Chicken
    This Like Fried Styrofoam
    Like the broken tone

    Like I'm just not at home
    I know I'm leaving
    I know......
    But maybe I need to wait until I get There

    Maybe thats where
    So many of me will unfold
    Let me see
    "Girl Where you been?"

    I'm Gettin Impatient
    Because I'm trying to Exercise
    and begin feeling...again
    I'm Tryna Exorcise

    The demons that plague me
    They think I'm Playing But
    They should already see
    Even though I am :?: ,

    Maybe a tad :em2100:
    and always Lost inda Sauce
    I never bow to the evil
    I never empower the fiendish way

    I simply wait
    I wait for my day
    Which is comeing by the way :hi:
    But back to the regular

    I am grooving to the instrumental
    I am eating with no spoon
    I am just wondering
    "what Happened to the dag on Moon?!?"

    Complete me I ask
    Let me stop
    Girl you got more wishes
    than a Genie Monsoon

    I
    D
    K....
    I'm just waiting for my day

    I want it to be perfect
    I need it exquisite
    Map it down...like every way
    Even though I'm still just a Bay Bay(ha ha Nicey)

    I
    D
    K....
    You know I need :help:

    Dem days when all I can do is yelp
    Yelp Yelp
    If I do not need to
    I can Play Play Play

    I
    D
    K....:?:
    I am justa waiting for my day.....(sigh)
    :em2100:
     
  2. FattnBeautiful

    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love how you played with words and the use of the smily faces. This was a fun although right now you are lost in the sauce I know you will find your way.
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lost or no, your pen always finds it's way out. Are you aware how much creative flair you have?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome flow and ya pen is in da clear and seen so lost be not
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Sis
    you made not be playing but I could help but smile
    Wonderful word play that fill with style. You do
    know how to have fun .Much love

    Peace~N~Love
     
  6. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SMH.....
    You make me Blush too much!!!!!!
    Blessings Family
    I appreciate you so Much!!!!!
    :grouphug:
     
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