Black Poetry : a journey to me

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  1. realeyezrealize

    realeyezrealize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I once was led from whence one with no foundation was sent
    chasing nothingness left silent in a desert place.
    While being entertained on an emoitional rollercoaster I became infatuaded with the pain I claimed,
    so use to the highs and lows of sorrow numb to feel nothing but hurt, blinded so I couldn't see my life's worth.
    Staring only at the dirt around me as the pressures of whatever tried to tied me up so I would be stuck and never make it to the promised land.
    Foolishly I thought that my experiences had taught me everything this finet mind could bring into conclusions and coping was the reslution I had come to.
    But as my heart cried and the desire for change rised I decided my will would find a way.
    Now I see the snares,
    my depth allows me to hear and to know the agenda of the one that seeks to rob my soul of all it's glory.
    Conscious of who I am enables me to understand how to maintain and resist the negative voidness that wants to control me.
    So I fall back and let my creator fight for me
    my might is inadequete so his strong hand gets me through each situation.
    I can believe a vision for me based on the existence of his pressence this body is developed to transform to a new creation a temple for his kingdom come.
     
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    a journey through the space of thy existance
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello realeyezrealize:
    This piece is really awesome.
    I see your on the right track.
    Very nice flo.

    Much Luv
     
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    i like it is tite
    nice nice nice
    i can relate 2 this.

    peace.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes it takes the Lord to plant our feet in the right direction. Thanks for this.
     
  6. realeyezrealize

    realeyezrealize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for all the love
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really liked this piece its speaks volume to me!
     
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