Black Poetry : A Hundred Times

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  1. Soullyricist

    Soullyricist Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I concentrate and often meditate on you loving me
    Not necessarily why you do, but because you do
    I don’t really realistically expect for you to understand what I’m feeling through or the various emotions generating what I’m getting to
    I love you so **** much that imagining you not with me
    Not in me is causing me to realize just how much I love you
    But in realizing this I obviously can’t resist you
    So I must insist that you understand the way I feel
    Cause I just can’t tell you
    I can’t explain it to you and the thought of me trying to reiterate what I can’t formulate into words is driving me insane
    I love you
    You mean everything to me
    You are the reason I struggled through past loves I prayed would love me a fraction of how much you do
    But then,
    Then I found you
    The sexy young brotha
    Who completes me
    And treats me like
    No other man could
    And I never understood
    Until now
    Why I love you so **** much
    It’s not just because you’re fine as hell
    Sexy as hell
    Or cause you can lay the pipe strong as hell
    Cause you made me your queen and you stand as my king so **** well
    Cause we do fight and we do argue
    It’s not what we’ve gone through or what we’ll go through
    It’s not that
    I just do
    I physically, mentally, emotionally and spiritually can’t help loving you
    And this
    This is the reason why I’m so afraid of losing you
    But in your youth have shown me how to throw that fear to the wind and
    Just live
    So that makes me love you even more and it’s come to the point where I can’t even pronounce how it is I feel about you
    Because I don’t know what to call it
    And all this **** I just laid on this page
    Does not remotely explain or suffice as my feelings for you
    Because it’s more
    So much more than
    I love you a hundred times a day


    © Tawanda Roberson
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** girl!! u took the words rite out of my mouth...beautiful...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribe sistah
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When love is this strong, it is often inaudible,
    -------------------I can’t explain it to you and the thought of me trying to reiterate what I can’t formulate into words is driving me insane -----------Felt ur flow, right here!
     
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