Khasm13 : a hero aint nuthin but a sandwich...

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  1. Khasm13

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    here's a lil story that must be told....
    about one lil ***** who fell into da devils fold...
    back and forth makin ends meat in cold streets of gold...
    it's tragic cause steel and plastic ravage the young to the old...


    brian wadkins...also known as butta
    at the age of 11 was on da streets poppin...without a mother
    cause his moms left him at a shelter
    and went back to a man that gained pleasure in puttin bruises and welts on her
    she took it out on brian....the messed up hand that was dealt to her
    at the tender age of 2...suddenly he had no family
    no one to run to...what's a beautiful black baby to do?
    when your own flesh and blood abandons you?
    at the age of 14...he stoped going to high skool
    and put together his own crew
    the young bucks had a lot in common...tuff luck
    gats, dyme sacks and stealing garments
    on the regular...the only thing they understood
    was that in life there are victims and predators
    and the predators always got ahead of the
    victims if they learned how to pick them
    no longer do they say...stick them.....up
    they say give up da loot and da jewelz
    or i'll drink your blood from a cup
    s'pose to be a young pup
    but he was a product of the streets where violence always errupts
    ruff and tuff like thick strips of beef jerky
    6 stiffs had already felt his heat and saw his vacant black eyes that were murky
    his crew made deliveries and dished out drug penalties
    generally...
    if you didn't have the whole length
    your life expired from a.380 acp on da strength
    this ravenous pack of wolves held it down
    for big otis from da ground...to maybe the second floor
    brian was ambitious for more and more
    his street smarts was uncanny...smooth but yet harder then hardcore
    cause he cared not for his own life or what Gods plan be
    he only cared for what he could see and touch with a weakness for eye candy
    the kids in the neighborhood jocked him and clocked him at every chance
    grown @ss women put in bids to get in his bed and dance
    he kept a gat all da time in his pants and one on his right leg
    last month he shot a crooked undercover fed
    playin like he was a crack addict...
    *freeze...this is a bust*
    the only bust da cop got was his spleen and kidneys from an automatic
    brian's battle cry was emphatic and dramatic
    when he found out he blasted a cop
    he was like
    *it can't....won't....don't....stop*
    when he dipped from da scene...juice's baby's momma saw him fleeing
    when she told juice...he ran to da police and got loose...
    you see...juice was always a hater....he was 24 but had less then a 14 year old drug relayer
    brian quicky found out that he was wanted....but still undaunted
    he kept on keepin on...doing da same things like nothing was wrong
    2:37p.m. he was playing ball in da park
    when all of a sudden he hears
    *your surrounded brian wadkins...put down da ball and spread your arms apart*
    slowly he put down da pill then quickly reached for the gat on his leg underneath da tommy hill
    let off 7 shots while dipin pass da swings
    the hot gun clanged against his diamond studded platinum rings
    and when the snippers bullet passed thru his skull
    the lil kidz made him a martyr...and brian lived 4ever in their dreams
     
  2. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    khasm

    i see ya still keepin the floetry raw and real, what a tyte read to come back to
    Peace
    Nita
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This really touches me, Khasm. A severely ill flow you got goin on up in hurr.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tight i love when u take me on a poetic trip with ya....
    tight flow my brother...checkin dat suit out yanno...:wink:

    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well done poet i hear ya on dis............
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was all up in this sad tale poet, we all know that you know how to lay a tale down. Flow on brotha.
     
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    :kickball: Love the Ghettopoetics my brother. Keep the four fifth swinging.
     
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