Quiet Poetry Lounge : A Hell of a Woman

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Jul 14, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spinning and spinning
    My life circle incomplete
    My emotions confusrd
    Love misdirected
    Then fate caused us to meet

    I remember so clearly that glorious day
    The flow so real in all we had to say
    I prayed in silence that you would be mine
    So easily you opened my secret doors
    So quickly and completely
    My heart became yours

    My caution exposed as worthless
    With the very first touch of your loving hand
    Your love rushes through me
    Putting that feeling in my chest
    I don't understand

    Now moving together in trust and respect
    We continue to take such a beautiful ride
    Made even more lovely when we make love
    Exploding together when I touch you inside

    Each day our loves grows like vines in summer
    The laughter continues, the music plays on
    The circle now complete
    I've tied all loose ends
    In you I have a soul-mate
    A hell of a woman
    And my very best friend

    BE
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I do remember this lovely peace.... nice to read it again.

    thank you

    a :heart:
     
  3. sraheem2

    sraheem2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm relating in a huge way. Excellent, Poet.

    Saleem
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis one is outstanding ...poet flow on and write da wordz

    mo mo mo mo!!!!!!
     
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