Black Haiku : A Haiku Challenge For The Brothas...

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  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afraid to love you...
    How will you remove my fear?
    Can my heart trust you?





    ...joyce waiting from a response from a brotha haikuist
     
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    I'll remove your fear
    sincere words I will whisper
    as I hold you near :love:
     
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    May his sins find death
    For your heart needs a new life
    true love defeats doubt
     
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    Yes, you echo sweet words
    in my ear
    I thank God for you...
    holding me near​
     
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    No more shadow of doubt
    and my heart has took
    a new route...
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    Thanks ...to you​
     
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    queentswana

    And I thank you for
    trusting heart and loving hands
    allowing love's growth
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Will it be different?
    I've heard this so many times.
    So tired of the games.
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am bound by death.
    Please release me from it's grip.
    Give me a true love.
     
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    believeth in me
    i am thy beloved blanket
    to kiss away fear

    forth thy love listen
    intently be not afraid
    heart to heart we be
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your words are soothing.
    Will they calm my raging sea???
    Lonliness is tough.
     
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