Black Poetry : A Glimpse of Love's Thoughts

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Through the whirlwind of
    your heart, a gallant steed
    galloped across the plain
    giving me the love that I need
    The pure essence of you
    can never really be missed,
    rather, it is when I feel this cool
    cascade, that my soul is kissed
    Oh, how serenely I close my eyes when
    the gentle breeze of you happens by
    soothing my mind, and easing my fears
    with a peace that elicits a sigh...
    You emit a gold laced breath of sunshine
    with such an air of familiarity
    How is it that you can know me so,
    detailing every strength and frailty
    You are a jewel of the Nile
    that can never be hidden, your
    love's shower of rainbows colors
    all I see...
    as I give you all of me
    Let your diamond speckled waterfall
    continue to brilliantly pour
    For I will continue to love you
    all the more
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this one warm and sweet connection
    makes anyone heart just melt i love it
    tyte flow from the gallop heart ...........
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The words were truly meant and flowed from the gallop of love. Glad to know that you're loving this, thank you brotha Rich.
     
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    HODEE going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Like a gentle breeze, love has kissed you once again.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for your support on this Hodee, appreciated brotha.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Words of yours create a panoramic view of the beauty in finding love.

    One has a glimpse of oneself in the whole "shooting match" ~

    I pledge to always support this poet's work!
     
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    Lawd...girl

    I would say that "someone" QQ'n is lost in love...
    but I think the poem speaks for itself...*smiles*

    Beautiful...and that quoted portion---> gorgeous!
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was awfully nice to say 1poet, thank you brotha, appreciated.
    [email protected] angelicsage....Glad to know you enjoyed this piece. Thank you much.
     
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    Gurrrl!....You make me wanna throw a handful of pens at you or a shoe or sumpn! LOL!

    But not meanly...just cuz you did tha dang thang!


    But THIS part was my favorite:

    Whew! Now THAT is some POETRY! :bowdown:
     
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    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true poetry written down right here
     
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