Black Poetry : A full heart on empty..

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This feelin..
    Way down deep
    For it seeps in the core..
    That’s sumthins not right..
    The light is dim….no shade for the
    Cloud covers this light…
    Its warped..
    Crash course link
    Bound to sink
    In the dark..
    Unfold of what
    Cant reach…
    To clearly define
    The storm is furious..
    And envious bed in its path
    the pain contain within
    Kills every time….
    Mind twist of wits..
    Loose like missiles
    Steppin on minds…
    Surface like a snake to shake thy ground..
    Intertwined and play..as it laid its prey…
    Feelin sumthin not right…

    pieces of untitle life
    a blackangel thang.....
    copyright 2003
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this was a sober'n piece
    tyte scribe
    peace
    khasm
     
  3. caramelpython

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    Nice scribe angel...like always.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey Khasm..thanks fo da love on it.....means alot..

    CP...where ya been..thanks fo da love

    love yall... :grouphug:
     
  5. MsGhettoPoet

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    wow, i really love ur style. hot scribe. hot poem. hot errything! :). Also thanks for the welcome.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice flow well felt scribe poetess
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for da reply...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks sister Ola...
    glad ya like...
    i promise one day i stop watchin them
    old sad movies..lol
    thanks for reading
     
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